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The Box of Tricks
Copyright © 2005 Alistair Potter


Novel Type; SF action adventure/thriller, initial contemporary settings.

Agent/Publisher Blurb; The ORTIME corporation have the monopoly on the ultimate commodity - time. For the right price even the aging process can be reversed. But there is a terrible secret behind their technology. The time first needs to be stolen before it can be sold. Earth is targeted for time-farming. To save it from extinction our heroes, Les, a Newcastle Taxi driver, and Fanshawe, a soldier from the Napoleonic wars, decide to destroy the ORTIME technology, even though it is fundamental to the existence of a Federation of Earth-like Planets that spans over a hundred alternate realities.

Status; completed (81,000 words)

Reviews/Comments;

2005 Undiscovered Authors competition -

"I'm pleased to inform you that your typescript was short-listed for the General Fiction category for the Eastern Scotland region and was identified as a high literary standard by the panel of judges. Our judges believe that your finished book could have great commercial potential."

NovelPro from 3 anonymous SR reviewers, Jan 2006 -

"Well written. Fun romp. Highly commercial. Reminds me a bit of Harry Potter and Dune mixed. It was a pleasure to read something so well done from one of our group."

"The writing is good and polished, pace is good, story is original - and I'm fairly sure an agent/publisher focused on Sci-Fi will be intrigued."

"Ali's novel is in excellent shape. He's a fine writer and has crafted a totally engrossing story from start to finish."
 


 Chapter [1]

"Truth is what one believes at the moment."

- Lady Caroline Lamb.

 

        Dear Les, 

I think you’ll like this. First, sit down and make yourself comfortable. Now lay the little metal card on any flat surface. Place your hand on top of it and wait. Keep an open mind, and be ready for a big surprise.

 

As always, your uncle,

 

Jim Mathers.

 

Les held the card gingerly between finger and thumb. It had a uniform silvery finish and was slightly bigger and thicker than a credit card. Knowing his uncle’s fondness for practical jokes, it would probably snap apart with a loud bang. He placed it on his uncle’s prized roll-top desk and sat on the desk’s matching swivel chair. Pausing, he glanced up at the ceiling. “OK, you old rascal, here we go.”
       Cautiously he lowered his hand onto the card. He waited, anticipating the sudden something that would give his uncle one last
laugh from beyond the grave.
       Nothing happened and he let out a derisory snort, whatever it was supposed to do wasn't working. He was about to give up when the traffic noise in the street outside faded away to an eerie silence. Then the light in the room grew dimmer, quickly becoming too dark to be cloud obscuring the late afternoon sun.
      
Fighting the growing anxiety in his chest he forced himself to continue as his uncle’s room dwindled to a murky blackness.
       A new scene formed around him. At first ghostly and indistinct, it gradually took on depth and colour until he appeared to be on the pavement of a busy street in bright sunshine. There was an odd smell, which he suddenly realised was the distinctive pine air freshener lingering in his uncle's room—it was strangely reassuring.
       He still sat on the swivel chair, but in this new world he stood upright. It might have been a familiar scene, except that the cars floated along without wheels, and the pedestrians wore such a diverse kaleidoscope of fashions and colours it felt like standing in the middle of a movie lot filming everything from costume drama to space opera. One swirl of movement resolved into a breathtaking blonde wearing a skin-tight silver and gold cat-suit, another to a gorgeous redhead in an elegant ball gown. These were the kinds of women he never had the courage to approach.
       “Toto,” he mumbled self-consciously, “I've a feeling we're not in Kansas.”
       He wanted to look in a shop window. As the thought formed, his virtual body started towards it. He worried about bumping into the other pedestrians, but they avoided him, always staying just out of reach.
       The shop sold a range of complex and baffling electrical goods, few of them recognisable, but one looked a little like a kettle. He pressed his hand against the window and it passed effortlessly through. He knew of nothing as convincing as this virtual experience. The card was either some cutting-edge technology or an alien artefact. How had it come into his uncle’s possession?
       He willed himself to move along the street, pausing in front of other shops: one that sold shoes, another cakes and fancy pastries, and another women’s fashion. His eager explorations took him further from his starting point, but he didn’t worry about getting lost. He still felt the reassuring pressure of the chair under him.
       Les spotted a taller pedestrian walking with greater purpose, a dark haired muscular man in his fifties, wearing an immaculately tailored black suit. His approach filled Les with growing trepidation. It hadn’t occurred to him that he might be sharing this fantasy world with anyone else. Was he even supposed to be here?
       The man strode up and stopped. “Hello, Les,” he said, “my name is Titus. Sorry I wasn’t here to meet you.”
       Les yanked his hand off the card. The scene disappeared and his senses reeled as a wave of nausea swept over him. For a terrifying moment a murky blackness surrounded him, and then his uncle’s room swam back into view.
       What had he just experienced? Was it an elaborate hoax or had he actually made contact with a being from another planet, or maybe even the future?
       He strode to the window and tugged it open. Leaning on the sill he took deep, calming breaths of the cool air. During his time in the other scene thick cloud had gathered over the city of Newcastle, bringing with it a fine drizzle of rain. In the street below several pale orange streetlights flickered on, and the first of the rush-hour traffic crept by.
       Les had found the card and note in a lacquered vanity box, nestled beside an automatic handgun made entirely from black glass. Something about the gun’s firm trigger pressure had stopped him pulling it. Could it be more than a fancy paperweight?
       He went over to the desk and picked it up. There were no obvious moving parts other than the trigger. He held it up in a two handed grip and squinted down the barrel. Panning around the room he caught sight of himself in a tall dressing mirror fixed to the wall. The face looking back was a pathetic stranger. His dark hair needed a trim, and a shadow of stubble lingered on his narrow chin. For too long he’d been losing interest in his appearance.
       A small cross of green light appeared on the reflection of his forehead. Startled, he dropped the gun and it thudded onto the threadbare carpet. He stared at it, his breath coming in short, quick bursts.
       A loud knock rattled the door and he jumped again.
       Mrs Cartwright, his uncle’s landlady, called from the hall, “Are you all right in there, pet?”
       Before he could answer, the door swung open and she swept in.
       “Sorry to disturb you,” she said, a cigarette wagging at the edge of her mouth, “but I need a quick word about the room.” She folded her arms, drawing a thick maroon cardigan tight across her chest, and eyed the few cardboard boxes and black plastic sacks Les had filled with his uncle’s belongings.
       Her eyes went wide and the cigarette almost fell from her mouth. “That’s not real is it?” she said, pointing at the gun.
       “No, it’s glass. I think it’s a paperweight.”
       She bent over and picked it up. “Oh, it’s heavier than it looks. What an odd thing. Think it’s worth anything?”
       “No idea,” said Les. He spotted the green cross tracking across the wall like a laser pointer and quickly took the gun back. He put his hand over the muzzle, wondering if the itch in his palm was real or imaginary. “What was it about the room?” he said.
       Mrs Cartwright’s face became a picture of sympathy. “I know this is a difficult time for you, and Mr Mathers was a nice old gent, but the room’s only paid for until today. I’ve got someone coming to look at it in about twenty minutes, I’ll need to give it a quick clean before showing it. I’m sorry if that doesn’t give you much time to move things out.”
       “That’ll be fine,” said Les, “but I’ll have to organise a van for the desk. Would a pick-up tomorrow be OK?”
       “Of course, pet.” Mrs Cartwright took the cigarette from her mouth and looked around for an ashtray. Seeing none, she tapped the ash into her cardigan pocket. “Is five minutes enough time to finish up?” she said.
       Les nodded, glad she was leaving. Then he had a sudden awful thought. His uncle wanted him to meet the man in the virtual world, but what if the card didn’t work anywhere else? “Mrs Cartwright,” he said quickly, “I was wondering, could I take the room?”
       She narrowed her eyes and remained silent.
       Les took the hint. “It’s more central than my place, bigger, nicer room, much nicer area.”
       “Well—I don’t just take anybody.”
       Les waved at his face. “I should really have shaved today, I forgot, Uncle Jim’s death has been a bit of a blow.”
       She raised an eyebrow. “Have you got a job?”
       “Taxi driver.”
       “You not married? Lad your age should be married. How about kids? I don’t allow kids.”
       “No kids, no wife.”
       Satisfied, Mrs Cartwright reeled out a list of terms and conditions finishing with, “...and I’ll need two weeks in advance, I’ll need that tomorrow.”
       As soon as she was out of the room Les replaced the gun in the vanity box. The card sat innocuous on the desk, starkly modern against the rich green leather of the desk’s writing pad. He had to try it again.
       He settled in the chair, took several deep breaths, and lowered his hand onto it. Nothing happened. Although he knew it hadn’t worked straight away the first time, disappointment grew by the second. What if the card only worked once or had limited life. Had he already used up his chance? Then, with a strange mixture of fear and relief, his persistence paid off. The room faded away, replaced by the sunny street scene.
       A shadow flickered by and Les flinched. A flying car passed overhead, level with the rooftops. He peered through the surge of pedestrians, searching for the man in the dark suit. He had gone. All Les could do was wait and hope he would reappear.
       A flash of greenery about a block away caught his attention and his virtual body gave him a fright when it immediately stepped into the busy road towards it. With a high-pitched whine the nearest vehicle slewed to a halt, the traffic behind it stopping as quickly. The expected blare of horns and shouting would have been a relief from the strange silence that followed. Unnerved by the expressionless stare from the vehicle’s driver, Les willed himself across the road.
       The park gardens were too perfect. Though the flowers were spectacular and unusual, they were too evenly planted, and the grass impossibly short and fine. Les quickly lost interest. He walked on, heading for a line of hills on the edge of the city.
       The thrill of crossing the roads and stopping the traffic would probably fade with time, but seeing these futuristic vehicles pull to a sudden halt became a perverse and exciting entertainment. He became so engrossed in his game of virtual jaywalking he didn’t notice the man in the dark suit waiting on the pavement opposite until he walked right up to him. Unlike all the other pedestrians, he held his ground.
       “Glad to see you again, Les,” he said. “In case you missed it first time, my name is Titus.”
       Les couldn’t reply, his throat felt painfully tight.
       “You can answer. I will hear you.”
       “Right,” croaked Les.
       “I’ve not got much time,” said Titus, “so I’ll get right down to it. My government has a proposition for you. We’d like you to work for us returning items that occasionally get misplaced.”
       “...misplaced items,” said Les, vacantly.
       Titus held up a glass gun identical to the one Les had found. “This is a tuning device. It allows us to target the items and bring them back. It serves no other function, and will not affect anything other than a target object.”
       Les nodded numbly. “Got it—tuning device—brings stuff back.”
       “It’s difficult for us to recover the items ourselves, so we find it simpler to employ a local agent on your planet.”
       The reality came like a slap to Les’s face. Titus was an alien. “You’re not from Earth?” he said.
       “No.”
       Les felt his heart rate increase. “Then where are you from?”
       “A little background might help,” said Titus. “Your uncle did the job for us for a long time.”
       Titus had ignored Les’s question. “My uncle, I never guessed.”
       “Yes, a very capable man in his day.”
       “And you paid him?”
       “Of course. We arranged for him to win prizes in competitions. We alter the computer records and replace the actual winner’s name with yours. With our technology, it’s not that difficult.”
       “What did Uncle Jim do?”
       “I would tell him where to find a target object. He located it and triggered its recovery by shooting it.”
       “It sounds easy.”
       “Not always. It requires a certain creativity to get close enough to an object if it’s not easily accessible. It was your uncle’s suggestion that we approach you. He spoke well on your behalf.”
       “The old rascal.”
       Titus smiled. “So you’ll consider taking the job?”
       “I suppose, yes, I’ll consider it.”
       “Excellent. I’ll leave you for a few days to make your decision. Use the communicator card to contact me with your answer. I guarantee this is a real opportunity to better yourself.” Titus checked his watch. “About this time of day will do.”
       “Fine, but your world,” Les motioned to the scene around them, “where is it?”
       “I’m sorry. I can’t say. That rule is part of our terms of employment.” Titus glanced at his watch again. “I’m afraid I’ve run out of time. Do contact me with your answer. Goodbye for now.”
       Before Les could speak, the scene faded with his hand still on the card. A less intense wave of nausea swept over him, passing quickly.
       Les took the gun from the desk and aimed it at an old wardrobe. When the green cross appeared he cautiously pulled the trigger. The cross pulsed brighter for a moment. He inspected the wood around the target area, and found it reassuringly undamaged.
       Was it a genuine offer of work or an elaborate con. Had his Uncle Jim really been working for Titus? It would explain his uncle’s sporadic business trips. At one time his uncle had appeared to be quite prosperous, something he shared with Les and maybe too many others. His fondness for easy living and his failure to plan for retirement had brought him to this single room in a run-down boarding house. Les did not need to follow the same path.

#

Two days later a letter arrived at Les’s new address. He collected it from a long sideboard in the entrance hall next to Mrs Cartwright’s apartment. It contained a money order for £400.00, second prize in a competition to create an advertising slogan for a popular cat food. Fortunately the cash option had been selected, saving Les the problem of explaining the arrival of a small mountain of Kitty-Delicious cat food to Mrs Cartwright.
       Les took the money order to his bank and cashed it immediately. He stared as the teller counted the crisp, new ten pound notes into a neat pile. This was clearly an advance, a show of good faith and proof of the method of payment.
       How hard could it be? Definitely easier than driving taxis, especially considering the hours he normally worked to earn this amount of money. Unlike the fanciful tales of adventure and intrigue that he loved to read, this was real. He would be a fool to let such an amazing opportunity pass.

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